Can you read my face through blank expressions?
How can I walk in all directions?
The cries, blue skies, eyes see a new nation.
My old universe gave me a new situation.
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I am Achilles, thoughts equivalent my heel
Mystical as me what my thoughts reveal.
Long live the sun to let me steal
all the light; But still dark and blind I feel.
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Life is like a book that I cannot read;
Like another planet where I cannot breathe.
Still bought this book with curiosity
Just to meet the writer from another city.
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The walls stand unmoved, so do I
They block my way, wish I could fly.
Distances make roads like a human makes a lie
Don’t take that path, even immortals die.
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Can I reach the day beyond my reach?
Will that morn teach things impossible to teach?
Should never count the stairs when we climb
They keep going, never end till we reach time.
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Been stuck in the world, can I get out?
Single mind with infinite doubts.
Maybe I want something which doesn’t exist
My entire life will end making the list.
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An unbelievable magic, how far I’ve come
Believably tragic, how weak I’ve become.
The hands that framed me, are in my hands
Like a mirage in the desert sands.
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This verse is a curse, the quatrain is a pain
I can see my whole universe drowning in the rain.
Is this a defeat? should I retreat?
Sounds easy being written on a paper sheet.
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My heart sees God, but I never do
Is it a dream or a dream that wish I knew?
My life is a window which I can’t see through
but it chose me as its hero… and not you!
Awesome..you are sure to become acclaimed Writtet soon..move on
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Mind blowing
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Wonderful Poem. Showing your versatility as a writer.. Move on Avneet
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Amazing!! touched my heart!!
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True thoughts… World is awaiting people like you!
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Some very interesting lines here.
Here’s a couple of my favorites:
“The walls stand unmoved, so do I”
“Should never count the stairs when we climb”
Keep up the good work!
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Thank you so much 🙂 i am glad
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Your poem is one of the best I’ve ever read. I love it!
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😃😃 THank YOu !! I am GLad.
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Thoughts👌👌❤
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Always good when you are impressed 😎
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Wonderful thoughts, beautiful composition “can u read my face, through blank expressions” You ll set A milestone in future. Mark my words, I am saying as I m reading Punjabi literature since 40 years. U r like Jaswant Singh Kanwal.
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Thank you sir . You have made me overly happy 😃
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Very touching.
God bless you Avneet
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Thank you very much, sir.
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Excellent you are good writer Avneet Sandhu keep it up
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Thanks a lot, Sir.
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Good work .keep it up
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Thank you 😃
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